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for one thing many corrections need to be made just to name a few: 1.not be marvelled on the speakers plz but "be minful of the speakers please"
2.i think its not "coz we" but "kobe"
3 "so many damn rappers there's a CIPHER in heaven"(a cipher is like a freestyle battle)
4not steady jumpin' round but "steady dropping rhymes" besides that good job with the lyrics
for one thing many corrections need to be made just to name a few: 1.not be marvelled on the speakers plz but "be minful of the speakers please"
2.i think its not "coz we" but "kobe"
3 "so many damn rappers there's a CIPHER in heaven"(a cipher is like a freestyle battle)
4not steady jumpin' round but "steady dropping rhymes" besides that good job with the lyrics