You have in the first chorus, when the lights went down you shined. It's 'shone'.
Like a mirrored train at dawn, not mirror.
Our mine she'd be rubies,
but deep down you'd find pearls
'cause underneath this cave
there are a thousand crashing waves.
One of them knows you, not annoys you.
I have a couple of mistakes to correct.
Hollered not hollared.
You have in the first chorus, when the lights went down you shined. It's 'shone'.
Like a mirrored train at dawn, not mirror.
Our mine she'd be rubies, but deep down you'd find pearls 'cause underneath this cave there are a thousand crashing waves. One of them knows you, not annoys you.
Thirteenth floor not pillar.
Dog alive in our arms not her arms.
I think that's all. :-D