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First comment on my favourite song =]
i might be wrong, but to me a couple of lines sound a bit off
"grab on onto the life raft," - i reckon that should be "jump up onto the life raft"
"That was the time to make her stand" - i reckon that should be "Now is the time to make her stand"
See what you think =]
First comment on my favourite song =]
i might be wrong, but to me a couple of lines sound a bit off
"grab on onto the life raft," - i reckon that should be "jump up onto the life raft"
"That was the time to make her stand" - i reckon that should be "Now is the time to make her stand"
See what you think =]