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"A major album, please" should be "A maze where I was placed." I think there are some more errors in the first few lines, but i'm not positive. I think "sinking" is "sprinting."
"Helplessly in shock" is "hopelessly and choke."
"A major album, please" should be "A maze where I was placed." I think there are some more errors in the first few lines, but i'm not positive. I think "sinking" is "sprinting."
"Helplessly in shock" is "hopelessly and choke."