"flag out petitions" might possibly be "vague apparitions"?
"cling" to the senses/nothingness?
"tension and dying air"?
i keep hearing "'not' filled with summer"
and "cracks in the ocean 'crust'", possibly? haha rhymes with dust lol
nice job, those first 3 lines i had a couple completely different lines but yours are definitely right
"flag out petitions" might possibly be "vague apparitions"? "cling" to the senses/nothingness? "tension and dying air"? i keep hearing "'not' filled with summer" and "cracks in the ocean 'crust'", possibly? haha rhymes with dust lol nice job, those first 3 lines i had a couple completely different lines but yours are definitely right