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Great song.
A few corrections:
"Wish I could be your lover, be your true lover" should be: "Wish I could be your lover, be your lover true"
"Love me tonight Then, face down, love me tonight" Should be: "Then, face down, so face down, Love me tonight, love me tonight"
and at near the end "You'd get the feeling that my love for you's not right" should be "You'd get the feeling that your love for me's not right"
Great song.
A few corrections:
"Wish I could be your lover, be your true lover" should be: "Wish I could be your lover, be your lover true"
"Love me tonight Then, face down, love me tonight" Should be: "Then, face down, so face down, Love me tonight, love me tonight"
and at near the end "You'd get the feeling that my love for you's not right" should be "You'd get the feeling that your love for me's not right"