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Also,
"so I go over it in my head I walk through those doors"
Should be
So I take this screaming in my head, I walk through those doors"
I'm not sure how that mistake was made, as they don't sound very close.
Also,
"so I go over it in my head I walk through those doors"
Should be
So I take this screaming in my head, I walk through those doors"
I'm not sure how that mistake was made, as they don't sound very close.