Also, "bold face type covers your text, it must have been winter" and "sleep on concrete with both your eyes open" sound like its talking about a homeless person. The "bold face type covers" sound like a newspaper, and the other example reinstates that.
Also, "bold face type covers your text, it must have been winter" and "sleep on concrete with both your eyes open" sound like its talking about a homeless person. The "bold face type covers" sound like a newspaper, and the other example reinstates that.