ronnie day is no doubt incredibly talented, but goddamn, his lyrics lack subtlety. "His room smells like crying"?? lol sorry, but i almost laughed at that. he's not even trying to rhyme it w/ anything, so why not make it something like "the scent of stale tears" or SOMETHING?
[haha & i wrote this right before i read what daystoforget wrote... great stuff]
his songs are really good, but the theme of "jamie broke my heart" gets really old really fast. someone this talented has GOT to have a little more depth than this...
ronnie day is no doubt incredibly talented, but goddamn, his lyrics lack subtlety. "His room smells like crying"?? lol sorry, but i almost laughed at that. he's not even trying to rhyme it w/ anything, so why not make it something like "the scent of stale tears" or SOMETHING?
[haha & i wrote this right before i read what daystoforget wrote... great stuff]
his songs are really good, but the theme of "jamie broke my heart" gets really old really fast. someone this talented has GOT to have a little more depth than this...