I agree that the pen and notebook blowing her away represent how she fell in love with him for his song writing. I think the relationship is failing though "Your favourite colour is that of red wine, which brings me around to your favourite past time" sounds like he drinks too much?
And this may be going too far, but when the stars are on the south/prettiest side, could that be to do with what mood he's in tonight? Maybe if he drinks he can sometimes be this sweet songwriter she adores, but also has a darker side "Will you stumble or fall tonight?".
I agree that the pen and notebook blowing her away represent how she fell in love with him for his song writing. I think the relationship is failing though "Your favourite colour is that of red wine, which brings me around to your favourite past time" sounds like he drinks too much? And this may be going too far, but when the stars are on the south/prettiest side, could that be to do with what mood he's in tonight? Maybe if he drinks he can sometimes be this sweet songwriter she adores, but also has a darker side "Will you stumble or fall tonight?".