i can tell right now, those lyrics probably mean shit all.
no offense, but i've seen good lyrics.. these don't quite match up.
as constructive criticism, i think you should learn how to make up decent rhymes before writing up a whole set of song lyrics.
i can tell right now, those lyrics probably mean shit all. no offense, but i've seen good lyrics.. these don't quite match up. as constructive criticism, i think you should learn how to make up decent rhymes before writing up a whole set of song lyrics.