They put it up on their myspace and I do love it! few suggestions:
to me "Cause I've overcommitted myself." sounds like "Cause I've overcommit myself" and "Oh that I've grown up" sounds like "Now that I've grown up" these changes go along with the idea that the singer grows up during the song.
They put it up on their myspace and I do love it! few suggestions:
to me "Cause I've overcommitted myself." sounds like "Cause I've overcommit myself" and "Oh that I've grown up" sounds like "Now that I've grown up" these changes go along with the idea that the singer grows up during the song.