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"and when you call me will you stay with me a while?" should be "and when you call me could you stay with me a while?"
"you know I need you like a chinese star" should be "you know I need you like a child needs the stars"
"and when you call me will you stay with me a while?" should be "and when you call me could you stay with me a while?"
"you know I need you like a chinese star" should be "you know I need you like a child needs the stars"