You did a really good job on the lyrics, it's hard doing it by ear - I would just change a few things;
"Now it's fine cousine" to "Now eats fine cousine"
"As if you'd stand a single glare of one of us" sounds more like "As if you'd stay this single hell, oh, meant for one of us (bus?)" But that doesn't make much sence, and is pretty much driving my crazy.
And "When singing to the door, now" to "We're singing to the dog, now"
You did a really good job on the lyrics, it's hard doing it by ear - I would just change a few things;
"Now it's fine cousine" to "Now eats fine cousine"
"As if you'd stand a single glare of one of us" sounds more like "As if you'd stay this single hell, oh, meant for one of us (bus?)" But that doesn't make much sence, and is pretty much driving my crazy.
And "When singing to the door, now" to "We're singing to the dog, now"