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I don't know elfrijol, "Writhing in the old bliss" matches better grammatically or whatever with "Reeling in the sweet grip." Also, "old bliss" is something you presumably would "never forget" ...opus just seems wrong.
I don't know elfrijol, "Writhing in the old bliss" matches better grammatically or whatever with "Reeling in the sweet grip." Also, "old bliss" is something you presumably would "never forget" ...opus just seems wrong.