Fix -> Affix
Arab best -> arabesques
the reefs -> the reeds
commerants -> cormorants
It's -> Its
ziggurats -> Sycorax
photo -> foretold
beneath -> below
With this bare waking eye -> Witnessed by no waking eye
Lastly, I don't think the last two lines are a quotation, though I suppose that's debatable.
A couple corrections, as of 21 August:
Fix -> Affix Arab best -> arabesques the reefs -> the reeds commerants -> cormorants It's -> Its ziggurats -> Sycorax photo -> foretold beneath -> below With this bare waking eye -> Witnessed by no waking eye
Lastly, I don't think the last two lines are a quotation, though I suppose that's debatable.