Hey! Nice job. I think I have a few corrections though.
The chorus should read:
Sing me to sleep tonight, sweet Juliet
Two STAR-CROSSED lovers married(?), looking for regrets
By daybreak I'll be gone and searching for your CORPSE
LEAVE me a drop of poison waiting on your lips.
The next line should be:
In ever war there will be casualties
......
......
So how many more until we're all BLED OUT.
The bridge should be:
I'm killing cousins, revenge I seek
In FAIR VERONA I will lay him down, down to sleep
In desperation, poison becomes
This story's ending in a TOMB OF LOVER'S (trust?)
Hey! Nice job. I think I have a few corrections though.
The chorus should read:
Sing me to sleep tonight, sweet Juliet Two STAR-CROSSED lovers married(?), looking for regrets By daybreak I'll be gone and searching for your CORPSE LEAVE me a drop of poison waiting on your lips.
The next line should be:
In ever war there will be casualties ...... ...... So how many more until we're all BLED OUT.
The bridge should be:
I'm killing cousins, revenge I seek In FAIR VERONA I will lay him down, down to sleep In desperation, poison becomes This story's ending in a TOMB OF LOVER'S (trust?)
Yay!