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Just some changes I thought should be made:
But HE loved HIS wife HE LOVED HER AND WAS faithful to her always Buried both the kids in the summer sun
Praying for HIS life Huddled in the brig all with the shipmates Praying for HIS life and I dropped the bomb
What you waiting for? Searching for YOUR brother In an empty room across the hall Is he coming back?
Listening at night Waiting for a SOUND to come up the stairs Listening at night for the sound of a car PAKING, YEAH
Summer skin Found another lover Tell him straight, TELL HIM ON THE PHONELINE (?) again
Tying both your shoes and Looking 'CROSS the ocean for the signal Waiting for a body in an open box
They don't send you letters They don't telephone your INNOCENT SELF (?) They don't send you letters But you're waiting for THEM TO WRITE HIM, YEAH
Probably my favorite song out of the demos.
Just some changes I thought should be made:
But HE loved HIS wife HE LOVED HER AND WAS faithful to her always Buried both the kids in the summer sun
Praying for HIS life Huddled in the brig all with the shipmates Praying for HIS life and I dropped the bomb
What you waiting for? Searching for YOUR brother In an empty room across the hall Is he coming back?
Listening at night Waiting for a SOUND to come up the stairs Listening at night for the sound of a car PAKING, YEAH
Summer skin Found another lover Tell him straight, TELL HIM ON THE PHONELINE (?) again
Tying both your shoes and Looking 'CROSS the ocean for the signal Waiting for a body in an open box
They don't send you letters They don't telephone your INNOCENT SELF (?) They don't send you letters But you're waiting for THEM TO WRITE HIM, YEAH
Probably my favorite song out of the demos.