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I have one correction, and I'm not 100% sure on this but this is what I hear in the first stanza of this song, plus it makes 10x's more sense than what you have written down:
"A sea-blue screaming over head just out of sight" --- I think it's:
"A seagul screaming overhead just out of sight".
I have one correction, and I'm not 100% sure on this but this is what I hear in the first stanza of this song, plus it makes 10x's more sense than what you have written down:
"A sea-blue screaming over head just out of sight" --- I think it's:
"A seagul screaming overhead just out of sight".