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Thx for the help so far guys, and you're right: I do hear that first line now... though it still doesn't make a lot of sense to 'feel a body loose', but they wanted it to rhyme, i guess... keep commenting on possible corrections and I'll fix it...
Thx for the help so far guys, and you're right: I do hear that first line now... though it still doesn't make a lot of sense to 'feel a body loose', but they wanted it to rhyme, i guess... keep commenting on possible corrections and I'll fix it...