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Few corrections: breathing down the backs They held you there Your haiku eyes they lit up
and I'm not sure what it says before "ten-west sunset", but it's not "just a" maybe "with the"
Few corrections: breathing down the backs They held you there Your haiku eyes they lit up
and I'm not sure what it says before "ten-west sunset", but it's not "just a" maybe "with the"