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find the fire's is right...as is "to tire"
then it's "But under the tunnel, I'm holding my breath"
then it's "I searched every parka that hung in the closet"
I don't get that second to last line...it almost sounds like "crawls in the bar"...but I don't know
find the fire's is right...as is "to tire"
then it's "But under the tunnel, I'm holding my breath"
then it's "I searched every parka that hung in the closet"
I don't get that second to last line...it almost sounds like "crawls in the bar"...but I don't know