Try Too Hard Lyrics

Lyric discussion by musichog 

Cover art for Try Too Hard lyrics by Teddy Geiger

I enjoy the meaning behind this song but I don't like the extra guitar or base part on the line, "She'll break my heart.Break my little heart." in the secound chorus or on the lines, "Why can't it be just this once alright?" I just feel like the extra guitar sounds displaced and wrong. It kinda ruins the song. But they it was pretty amazing from a 11 year old to write.