the second verse looks makes it sound more like hes being sold at a county fair. "makeshift awning." and "knees on the ground and a stick in my back" evokes ownership/prisoner images. Like how those pictures of POW camps in korea have guys kneeling tied to sticks and trees.
How it fits into the theme of the first verse beats me. but the third combo verse is nicely executed. If you dont read the lyrics it sneaks by you.
the second verse looks makes it sound more like hes being sold at a county fair. "makeshift awning." and "knees on the ground and a stick in my back" evokes ownership/prisoner images. Like how those pictures of POW camps in korea have guys kneeling tied to sticks and trees. How it fits into the theme of the first verse beats me. but the third combo verse is nicely executed. If you dont read the lyrics it sneaks by you.