For everybody (not only on here, I've seen other forums/discussions as well) who is complaining about the childish almost bad teenage poetry part of the beginning, ever think of this?
Writers often use more than just words themself to introduce a concept. I think by using the simplicity of those beginning lyrics, he is trying to get across that the love, or the crush even, he feels is really childish--pure, innocent. And I think this is encouraged with the children laughing shortly after.
It's not the actual words, but they way he writes them, which are the brilliance that some people are seeming not to understand.
For everybody (not only on here, I've seen other forums/discussions as well) who is complaining about the childish almost bad teenage poetry part of the beginning, ever think of this?
Writers often use more than just words themself to introduce a concept. I think by using the simplicity of those beginning lyrics, he is trying to get across that the love, or the crush even, he feels is really childish--pure, innocent. And I think this is encouraged with the children laughing shortly after.
It's not the actual words, but they way he writes them, which are the brilliance that some people are seeming not to understand.