This song, to me seems to be young love in its greatest form. It has such incredible optimism that it almost makes me want to vomit, lol. The song is full of sunny pictures of eyes opening and bright days and changes from bad to better.
Though I like the song, the writing ranges from well-crafted to sloppy. The rhyming is sort of begging the question, and there is a lot of shifting back and forth on topic. That being said, there are some great lines. For example, the title is full of optimism and confidence for the future, and the bit about clouds is quite a nice image.
Musically, it utilizes the power of the Cadd9 chord, and makes sure there's a constance to the song by holding down that D note throughout all the chords--one of my favorite Beatle tricks, later perfected in the calmness of Julia. I also like the syncopation between chords, it gives you a bouncy feeling that feels right at home. I guess that means you live in a trailer or in an earthquake zone.
This song, to me seems to be young love in its greatest form. It has such incredible optimism that it almost makes me want to vomit, lol. The song is full of sunny pictures of eyes opening and bright days and changes from bad to better.
Though I like the song, the writing ranges from well-crafted to sloppy. The rhyming is sort of begging the question, and there is a lot of shifting back and forth on topic. That being said, there are some great lines. For example, the title is full of optimism and confidence for the future, and the bit about clouds is quite a nice image.
Musically, it utilizes the power of the Cadd9 chord, and makes sure there's a constance to the song by holding down that D note throughout all the chords--one of my favorite Beatle tricks, later perfected in the calmness of Julia. I also like the syncopation between chords, it gives you a bouncy feeling that feels right at home. I guess that means you live in a trailer or in an earthquake zone.
CW