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good job but a few minor corrections:
"white felt pen" should be "white-out pen"
"The riders on the tube keep call callin' their cell phones" should be "The riders on the tube keep cold coal in their belt folds" (i think..)
the "Do the constables.." parts should be "Till the constables.."
and right after that part, you hear someone say in the background "Till the cows come home"
i'm not sure the last two lines in the "riders on the tube" part but you did as good a job as i could've at figuring them out.
also, good song. about coke addiction.
good job but a few minor corrections:
"white felt pen" should be "white-out pen"
"The riders on the tube keep call callin' their cell phones" should be "The riders on the tube keep cold coal in their belt folds" (i think..)
the "Do the constables.." parts should be "Till the constables.."
and right after that part, you hear someone say in the background "Till the cows come home"
i'm not sure the last two lines in the "riders on the tube" part but you did as good a job as i could've at figuring them out.
also, good song. about coke addiction.