My thoughts:
"Life gains intensified pain
to ascend within me once again"
-Indeed it could mean that, being tired of the pain of life and it's woe,
"a quitus has conquered thy eyes
the sequel of life"
-and finally perishing from the trouble of it all. (Could be suicide)
"The strife drawn hither as a daydream
ascendancy"
-Could be arising from the death and into a dream, as the song continues as if the person is looking back at their life.
"Enclasp my wrath in the prophecy of thine
Perchance to dream... Day of ire prithee
behold the haven of life"
-In a dream like state while dead, feeling safe and away from the pain of life
"Enter the morning glades
of a fallen deathwish"
-A walk in elysian fields is also a popular idea from after death, this could be the same thing, walking through the land of 'heaven'.
"Enter the mourning shades
Call out in vain
for thee again"
-Then perhaps the person has a reflection about all the good things in life, perhaps a love, but now there is only the darkness, covered in an illusion, and finally,
"A star of riddance rage through the sky
Grant me thy visions... bequeath me life
Through times of yearning... on a path of indignity
No longer burning... at last this life's circuit I leave"
-At first, there could be anger and other emotions the person experiences, but at last there is acceptance, and is still glad nevertheless.
My thoughts: "Life gains intensified pain to ascend within me once again" -Indeed it could mean that, being tired of the pain of life and it's woe, "a quitus has conquered thy eyes the sequel of life" -and finally perishing from the trouble of it all. (Could be suicide) "The strife drawn hither as a daydream ascendancy" -Could be arising from the death and into a dream, as the song continues as if the person is looking back at their life. "Enclasp my wrath in the prophecy of thine Perchance to dream... Day of ire prithee behold the haven of life" -In a dream like state while dead, feeling safe and away from the pain of life "Enter the morning glades of a fallen deathwish" -A walk in elysian fields is also a popular idea from after death, this could be the same thing, walking through the land of 'heaven'. "Enter the mourning shades Call out in vain for thee again" -Then perhaps the person has a reflection about all the good things in life, perhaps a love, but now there is only the darkness, covered in an illusion, and finally, "A star of riddance rage through the sky Grant me thy visions... bequeath me life Through times of yearning... on a path of indignity No longer burning... at last this life's circuit I leave" -At first, there could be anger and other emotions the person experiences, but at last there is acceptance, and is still glad nevertheless.
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