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in the first line "I'm" should be "I" and "breath" should be "breathe"
also "Your lips kiss, what's, something more like travel." should be "Your last kiss was something more like shrapnel" :)
It seems like it's about a long distance relationship... all he has are phone calls and the remembrance of their parting kiss.
in the first line "I'm" should be "I" and "breath" should be "breathe"
also "Your lips kiss, what's, something more like travel." should be "Your last kiss was something more like shrapnel" :)
It seems like it's about a long distance relationship... all he has are phone calls and the remembrance of their parting kiss.