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Indeed. This could be really good, but it's very vague and ambiguous. It's entirely open to interpretation. And that last line in the 4th stanza doesn't resolve itself, which doesn't help.
what's wrong with being open to interpretation?
Indeed. This could be really good, but it's very vague and ambiguous. It's entirely open to interpretation. And that last line in the 4th stanza doesn't resolve itself, which doesn't help.
what's wrong with being open to interpretation?
what's wrong with being open to interpretation?