PS: Actually, the first 4 lines of the song loosely reference Poe's "The Raven"
Also, I like the flow of the song, how he knows he is losing (or lost his love) in the first stanza, in the middle, he explains what he wants from her, and after the continued run-around, he gives up and will move on if that is how it has to be, but he hopes there is more to say...
PS: Actually, the first 4 lines of the song loosely reference Poe's "The Raven"
Also, I like the flow of the song, how he knows he is losing (or lost his love) in the first stanza, in the middle, he explains what he wants from her, and after the continued run-around, he gives up and will move on if that is how it has to be, but he hopes there is more to say...