this may not be ground breaking stuff, but maybe it'll get the ball rolling for someone else to throw in their 2 cents:<br>
points the rain has drawn = a river, gateposts of the forest and portal of the pines = forest on each side of the river, which compulsion.. = what will the effect of the sinking ship have. walls of a broken coughing tent = wind in the broken sail, sees the moon through it, obtuse = those things uncommon. makes a comparison to the waves being like music, and the lightning through the mast is a wave breaking the sail pole, famished dogs = tired crew, paws drag me to the dock = using paddles to row, pisces (fish) craves = drowning , man made lake = ???.... that's all i got for now
this may not be ground breaking stuff, but maybe it'll get the ball rolling for someone else to throw in their 2 cents:<br> points the rain has drawn = a river, gateposts of the forest and portal of the pines = forest on each side of the river, which compulsion.. = what will the effect of the sinking ship have. walls of a broken coughing tent = wind in the broken sail, sees the moon through it, obtuse = those things uncommon. makes a comparison to the waves being like music, and the lightning through the mast is a wave breaking the sail pole, famished dogs = tired crew, paws drag me to the dock = using paddles to row, pisces (fish) craves = drowning , man made lake = ???.... that's all i got for now