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It's good, but the other version is much better in my opinion. I agree, this is less 'let me help you' and more 'I just to help here, geez!' And she is a bit off-key, but I doubt I could have done much better.
It's good, but the other version is much better in my opinion. I agree, this is less 'let me help you' and more 'I just to help here, geez!' And she is a bit off-key, but I doubt I could have done much better.