Good job, I could find only one little mistake. In the beginning, "Today there was a vision of a house burning on a television, in a room inside and i- in a head topped by a brown curl." I think it would make more sense as, in a room inside an eye, in a head topped by a brown curl. Like the M.C. Escher drawing, (ha.)
Good job, I could find only one little mistake. In the beginning, "Today there was a vision of a house burning on a television, in a room inside and i- in a head topped by a brown curl." I think it would make more sense as, in a room inside an eye, in a head topped by a brown curl. Like the M.C. Escher drawing, (ha.)