Well , this person is just starting out so i give them that much .. wtf is up with dippy at the top promoting his own band .. thats just umm shit. anyhow , try to look for some beter words to replace some of these . its too simple and short . also , try to dig deeper and be a bit more vulnrable for your listeners ... work on it more but dont give up ..
Well , this person is just starting out so i give them that much .. wtf is up with dippy at the top promoting his own band .. thats just umm shit. anyhow , try to look for some beter words to replace some of these . its too simple and short . also , try to dig deeper and be a bit more vulnrable for your listeners ... work on it more but dont give up ..