"I said I love you
and still we come to goodbye
so here ill sit in my bed and cry"
Is that a joke? Man... If I hear the word 'cry' one mroe time, I'm going to invent a time machiene and kill Indian Summer, Rites of Spring, and Moss Icon for being somewhat of an inspiration to this crap... but then some really great bands wouldn't exist. Read my comment on your first song to see what you need to do to improve.
"I said I love you and still we come to goodbye so here ill sit in my bed and cry"
Is that a joke? Man... If I hear the word 'cry' one mroe time, I'm going to invent a time machiene and kill Indian Summer, Rites of Spring, and Moss Icon for being somewhat of an inspiration to this crap... but then some really great bands wouldn't exist. Read my comment on your first song to see what you need to do to improve.