I think it's "eyes focused in a stare" not "as focused"
also "subsists" and not "subsist". This song is obviously about a perfectionist who makes sure every detail of his life is exactly as he wants it. However, life is wacky and imperfect so it's impossible to actually be fufilled.
I think it's "eyes focused in a stare" not "as focused" also "subsists" and not "subsist". This song is obviously about a perfectionist who makes sure every detail of his life is exactly as he wants it. However, life is wacky and imperfect so it's impossible to actually be fufilled.