i think it's great that you strayed from traditional puppy love-sick stuff. a good artist and lyricist has variety. i would try to make this more vivid with the anger you feel towards your dad, don't be afraid to really get into it. show with images what you're trying to get across as opposed to telling what is happening.
i think it's great that you strayed from traditional puppy love-sick stuff. a good artist and lyricist has variety. i would try to make this more vivid with the anger you feel towards your dad, don't be afraid to really get into it. show with images what you're trying to get across as opposed to telling what is happening.