This is true, and some of her stuff is good. Her emotions shine through very brightly, but if she were to sharpen her skills more, she would be an excellent poet. I think that she tries too hard, honestly. You can't really create a poem, it just kinda has to happen. Ya know?
Her poem "The Things You Fear" from her first book of poems goes:
"The things you fear
are undefeatable
not by their nature
but by your approach"
That's it, that's the whole poem. It sounds more like an ad campaign to me. But I do like her poem "God Exists Quietly".
Sorry if I offended you.
This is true, and some of her stuff is good. Her emotions shine through very brightly, but if she were to sharpen her skills more, she would be an excellent poet. I think that she tries too hard, honestly. You can't really create a poem, it just kinda has to happen. Ya know? Her poem "The Things You Fear" from her first book of poems goes: "The things you fear are undefeatable not by their nature but by your approach"
That's it, that's the whole poem. It sounds more like an ad campaign to me. But I do like her poem "God Exists Quietly". Sorry if I offended you.