"All that I have
Doesn't seem to matter
All that I had
Is all that I needed
All that I have
Seems to just shatter
All that I had
It's all been cheated
Stolen from me
Stolen from me"
brilliant.
however, there are some parts ("I'll never see you again// Good ridance //Loneliness is my new friend// I'll never feel your touch again// Too bad//Too bad this had to end") the rhyming seems a bit desperate...
"All that I have Doesn't seem to matter All that I had Is all that I needed All that I have Seems to just shatter All that I had It's all been cheated Stolen from me Stolen from me"
brilliant.
however, there are some parts ("I'll never see you again// Good ridance //Loneliness is my new friend// I'll never feel your touch again// Too bad//Too bad this had to end") the rhyming seems a bit desperate...
But most parts fit together really well.