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I LOVE this soo much, even though it's simply an instrumental. It probably DOES have a lot of meaning behind it, but I'm not sure. Just a gloomy type of background. I tried playing this lol e.e;
Im not saying there trying to show off, but maybe this is just a demonstration of their skill, they get play soft, they can play LOUD, and the this instrumental is to just point THAT out so that their fame continues to grow, hence the songs title, immortal, maybe that their band is.
i get the impression that this song is about a rape. the soft part is the begining, everything going slow, then the heavy part is like, the girl struggling, the rape happening, and then it slows down because the rapist is done. then he smiles sadisticly looking at her, so proud of his perverted self.
I think this song is a wordless representation of a BDSM murder. The vision in my mind was deeply sadistic, perverted, demented, and just wholly sick. Don't tell me I'm going to hell, because I don't believe in it. OK HERE WE GO! The vision in my head was this: A beautiful girl walking down a dark street. She shivers, shifts her coat, and walks on, when suddenly, she is grabbed by a strange man. This is where the guitar changes for the first time It then shows her chained to the wall by her wrists and ankles, and she looks around, then yells and struggles, wordlessly, silently. The man looks on, smiling. When the guitar changes, he stabs her with a skinny, long needle, right through the skin of her underarm. Her mouth opens in asilent scream, and blood drips on the floor. The man smiles. When the guitar changes the next time, he stabs her with many needles ver the course of this "stanza." Now it is the part DIRECTLY before the heavy part, and it depicts the girl struggling a few more times, and then slowly dying. NOW IT'S THE HEAVY PART It's now that the man unchains her and starts performing sexual intercourse with her corpse. This goes on until the very last segment, which depicts him standing over her bleeding body, satisfied with his work.
...I am so gonna get hatemail when someone sees this.
YAH,HERE U GET A HATEMAIL. U ND UR THINKING R JUZ SO...... THE IMAGINATIONS WCH U ACTUALLY DO R SO SO HORRIBLE ND TERRIFYING,A DEVIL,EVIL CREATURE AND FULLY OMINOUS BEING CAN THINK OF ALL THIS CRAP I M DEAD SURE,ND U R GONNA GO TO HELL WETHER U BELIEVE IT OR NT,ITS A FACT.U A CRAP MIND,SUCH A BULLSHIT ,U NEED TO B TREATED MORE WORSE THAN WAT U THINK COZ A GUD PERSON CAN NEVER EVERTHINK OF GIVING SO WILD PAIN TO ANY1,ONLI A DEVIL CAN DO THE JOB,SO U B PREPARED TO GO TO HELL ND B WELCOMED...
YAH,HERE U GET A HATEMAIL. U ND UR THINKING R JUZ SO...... THE IMAGINATIONS WCH U ACTUALLY DO R SO SO HORRIBLE ND TERRIFYING,A DEVIL,EVIL CREATURE AND FULLY OMINOUS BEING CAN THINK OF ALL THIS CRAP I M DEAD SURE,ND U R GONNA GO TO HELL WETHER U BELIEVE IT OR NT,ITS A FACT.U A CRAP MIND,SUCH A BULLSHIT ,U NEED TO B TREATED MORE WORSE THAN WAT U THINK COZ A GUD PERSON CAN NEVER EVERTHINK OF GIVING SO WILD PAIN TO ANY1,ONLI A DEVIL CAN DO THE JOB,SO U B PREPARED TO GO TO HELL ND B WELCOMED BY MILLIONS OF DEVILS IN DERE ND CURSED SO BADLY ND TREATED LIKE A DOG.THTS ALL I WANTED TO SAY,I DIDNT SAID ALL DIS TO U OK ,IT GOES TO D PERSON WHO HAS ABILITY TO IMAGINE DESE CRAPS.
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I LOVE this soo much, even though it's simply an instrumental. It probably DOES have a lot of meaning behind it, but I'm not sure. Just a gloomy type of background. I tried playing this lol e.e;
i can play this on guitar really go0d, its sounds so so meaningfull on acoustic, i dunno why but its real real dark and.... weird =] natxXxXxXxXx
i like the sound. becuase. then it soflty the it get hard. i think it about that can go soft and heavy.
Im not saying there trying to show off, but maybe this is just a demonstration of their skill, they get play soft, they can play LOUD, and the this instrumental is to just point THAT out so that their fame continues to grow, hence the songs title, immortal, maybe that their band is.
@a child forever thats so cool and youre definitly right! this song and comment has aged pretty well with the band still touring after poor trish
@a child forever thats so cool and youre definitly right! this song and comment has aged pretty well with the band still touring after poor trish
Maybe the chords are difficult to play too?, adding complexity to the intrumental, making it that much better.
i get the impression that this song is about a rape. the soft part is the begining, everything going slow, then the heavy part is like, the girl struggling, the rape happening, and then it slows down because the rapist is done. then he smiles sadisticly looking at her, so proud of his perverted self.
@kittieroxsohard interesting point of view
@kittieroxsohard interesting point of view
@kittieroxsohard interesting point of view
@kittieroxsohard interesting point of view
I think this song is a wordless representation of a BDSM murder. The vision in my mind was deeply sadistic, perverted, demented, and just wholly sick. Don't tell me I'm going to hell, because I don't believe in it. OK HERE WE GO! The vision in my head was this: A beautiful girl walking down a dark street. She shivers, shifts her coat, and walks on, when suddenly, she is grabbed by a strange man. This is where the guitar changes for the first time It then shows her chained to the wall by her wrists and ankles, and she looks around, then yells and struggles, wordlessly, silently. The man looks on, smiling. When the guitar changes, he stabs her with a skinny, long needle, right through the skin of her underarm. Her mouth opens in asilent scream, and blood drips on the floor. The man smiles. When the guitar changes the next time, he stabs her with many needles ver the course of this "stanza." Now it is the part DIRECTLY before the heavy part, and it depicts the girl struggling a few more times, and then slowly dying. NOW IT'S THE HEAVY PART It's now that the man unchains her and starts performing sexual intercourse with her corpse. This goes on until the very last segment, which depicts him standing over her bleeding body, satisfied with his work.
...I am so gonna get hatemail when someone sees this.
YAH,HERE U GET A HATEMAIL. U ND UR THINKING R JUZ SO...... THE IMAGINATIONS WCH U ACTUALLY DO R SO SO HORRIBLE ND TERRIFYING,A DEVIL,EVIL CREATURE AND FULLY OMINOUS BEING CAN THINK OF ALL THIS CRAP I M DEAD SURE,ND U R GONNA GO TO HELL WETHER U BELIEVE IT OR NT,ITS A FACT.U A CRAP MIND,SUCH A BULLSHIT ,U NEED TO B TREATED MORE WORSE THAN WAT U THINK COZ A GUD PERSON CAN NEVER EVERTHINK OF GIVING SO WILD PAIN TO ANY1,ONLI A DEVIL CAN DO THE JOB,SO U B PREPARED TO GO TO HELL ND B WELCOMED...
YAH,HERE U GET A HATEMAIL. U ND UR THINKING R JUZ SO...... THE IMAGINATIONS WCH U ACTUALLY DO R SO SO HORRIBLE ND TERRIFYING,A DEVIL,EVIL CREATURE AND FULLY OMINOUS BEING CAN THINK OF ALL THIS CRAP I M DEAD SURE,ND U R GONNA GO TO HELL WETHER U BELIEVE IT OR NT,ITS A FACT.U A CRAP MIND,SUCH A BULLSHIT ,U NEED TO B TREATED MORE WORSE THAN WAT U THINK COZ A GUD PERSON CAN NEVER EVERTHINK OF GIVING SO WILD PAIN TO ANY1,ONLI A DEVIL CAN DO THE JOB,SO U B PREPARED TO GO TO HELL ND B WELCOMED BY MILLIONS OF DEVILS IN DERE ND CURSED SO BADLY ND TREATED LIKE A DOG.THTS ALL I WANTED TO SAY,I DIDNT SAID ALL DIS TO U OK ,IT GOES TO D PERSON WHO HAS ABILITY TO IMAGINE DESE CRAPS.