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Sufjan Stevens – Casimir Pulaski Day Lyrics 15 years ago
This song is so moving, I'm amazed by the storytelling in the lyrics.

The song is not sung in chronological order obviously, so it's tough to know when he finds out his girl has bone cancer in relation to the development of their relationship. But I have a couple of thoughts on the song overall.

For one, the relationship of the girl and her father is not good, she's scared of his reaction to them. He regrets the way he treated her (either before or after the death of the mom) and so he commits suicide after she dies.

And Sufjan, like many others, struggle with faith. He believes in God ("I see His face in the morning in the window") but he can't reconcile why a loving God ("All the glory when He took our place") doesn't step in and save her ("we lift out hands and pray over your body, but nothing ever happens") and instead takes her away from him ("and he takes, and he takes, and he takes").

My heart goes out to this man. Not only has he lost someone he loves, but he's also feeling betrayed spiritually because someone taught him that God is responsible for such deaths.

I bet this song echos the story of many.

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Grizzly Bear – Slow Life Lyrics 16 years ago
Good job on these lyrics. I did it from scratch and came up with the same thing. The only difference is the "wind in front of me" part. Idk. It's sounds to me like "till the wind is far at sea". Almost. It's the best I can do.

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Annuals – Sore Lyrics 16 years ago
After listening a bunch of times, I still think there are a couple tweeks. Just my $0.02

@jmb5346: This does sound like it could be written for his dog.

In the sorest of times
got your thoughts on my mind
The faster they come
the less I remember (you?)

On the brightest of days
you look three states away
You squint through the sun
as you leave with the sparrows at dawn

On the coldest of nights
I sit shaking in fright
I spit through my teeth
let it roll down my chin then I stare

If I ever let you out of bed
wIthout a kiss to the center of your head
Well then I never deserved you from the start
and you can let loose the warmth around my heart

If I never let you out of my door
you'd never have broke your leg in the park
If I never picked you out, this I'm sure
You'd be home with a family keeping warm

I the sorest of times
I can still find your light
If I'm down on my feet
If I'm hollow, I don't care

If I never let you out of my door
you'd never have broke your leg in the park
If I never picked you out, this I'm sure
You'd be home with a family keeping warm

[repeat]

Keeping warm
Keeping warm
Keeping warm

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