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Silvio Rodríguez – Ojalá Lyrics 17 years ago
Thank you Emiliana84 and Idril831; your comments were very enlightening. I started out thinking this song was about some guy's woman going cold on him. (i.e. turning the leaves into something frozen as opposed to beautiful crystals)

Now that I know the back story, I feel humbled. But I still believe that the lyrics can (loosely) be interpreted in another way. So I wrote a poem based on it. Except my subject is more general and detached (this poem is about America's shallow conception of beauty):


True Beauty's Loss

I hope the leaves don't touch you as they fall,
so that you can't freeze them up.
I hope the rain stops being a "wonder" running down your body.
I hope that the moon can come out without you.
I hope that the world doesn't give you an easy time.

I wish that your constant gaze, your perfect words, your perfect smile
would all just fade away.
I hope that something happens to get you off my mind:
A blinding flash of light, a blizzard,
something at least to take me to death,
So that I won't see you so much,
so that I won't see you at all,
in every second...in each waking vision.
I hope I can't even touch you in song.

I hope the dawn doesn't bring back
memories that fall on me.
and I wish that your name
didn't claim its glory.
If only your steps stopped echoing
in the walls of my mind...
I need for this useless lust to fade away...
to your land of flowers and emptyness.

I wish that your constant gaze, your perfect words, your perfect smile
would all just fade away.
I hope that something happens to get you off my mind:
A blinding flash of light, a blizzard,
something at least to take me to death,
So that I won't see you so much,
so that I won't see you at all,
in every second...in each waking vision.
I hope I can't even touch you in song. [Repeat]

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