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Okkervil River – A Hand To Take Hold Of The Scene Lyrics 7 years ago
@[proposals:24846]
This is a super old comment, and I have tried to submit your corrections (and a couple additional, these lyrics have several errors.

ALL CORRECTIONS CAPITALIZED FOR CLARITY:
"Is the queen FORMED OUT OF FLAWS WITH HER EYES ALL GONE ODD AND A ROD BOLTED INTO HER SPINE"

Quoting above: "She rises up like a YAWN, GRIPS MY HEART like a claw, splits apart like a jaw, like an eye"

"WHEN we're so far from right
WHEN we're losing the fight
WHEN we're letting the light weaken its beam"

"I want A SMILE LIKE A GLISTENING SHARD
I WANT A KISS THAT'S AS SHARP AS A KNIFE"

"And the dry cracked trembling lips GOD FELT FIT TO PUT THIS KISS INSIDE"

"A LIGHT that is fine and is filling the cryingest eyes
GRACE IN each face that is making THE WASTE DUST, BROKE NEST ONES fairly fly

Love that is INNOCENT of that old cynical, COVETOUS, cancerous vibe"

"Like it's lived in these nights, holding your hatred tight like a sign
THAT YOU'RE RIGHT OR YOU'RE strong
When YOUR doors are shut tight I will dream you tonight..."

Again quoting the correction above: "When ALL FIRES are fanned
And WE'RE SHUCKING our plans"

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Ours – God Only Wants You Lyrics 18 years ago
I think it's hopeless, not overplayed.

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