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Lior – Daniel Lyrics 19 years ago
splaire, good job. Only other problem is "hide beneath the vines" not behind.

Lomiothiel, I agree. Sounds like they were pot heads, and they parted ways when he cleaned up his act.

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Lior – Sitting with a stranger Lyrics 19 years ago
"shout of grey" I think is meant to be "shallow grave"
and "a festered waters" is "infested waters"
and it's "scream INTO the dark" I think.

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