| Eminem – Like Toy Soldiers Lyrics | 21 years ago |
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Badder Santa, I agree that this song is about all the feuds, and I agree with your last sentence. |
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| Eminem – Like Toy Soldiers Lyrics | 21 years ago |
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ReverendTM, Please do not take my critique the wrong way. I am not trying to say that I am better than you or anyone else. I was simply trying to remind you that you are a human being, imperfect as the rest of us are. I know I made some mistakes in my critique. If you should point them out to me like you do to everyone else, I am not going to give you the satisfaction of seeing me get upset over it. I will take your response and learn from it. That is how we become better people, we take our mistakes and learn from them. On a different note, I like this song. I think that this song is one of his better songs. Nicole. |
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| Eminem – Like Toy Soldiers Lyrics | 21 years ago |
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ReverendTM, There are a few mistakes you made, that I thought you would like to know about. "Anyways, he tries to take this seriously, so can be respected, and rake in the cash." In this sentence you forgot the word, "he". It should be written as follows, "Anyways, he tries to take this seriously, so HE can be respected..." (Emphasis added). In this next sentence, "Too bad the the only song that sell are his songs with lyrics "my bum is on your lips". The word "the" was written down twice. You wrote "... the only song that sell..." it should be "songs". Finally, in this last sentence that I will quote you on, "Plus, even if this was a serious song, what kind of people go about off-ing one another as a result of a verbal dispute." The word "Plus" is not necessary and you forgot to use a question mark at the end of your question. Well, I certainly hope you find my critique helpful. Nicole. PS If you are perfect, then why did you make so many mistakes? |
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