Would love some opinions on some lyrics
by MontroseKiss on May 11, 2012*If you want so skip the background info the lyrics are there just scroll down*
Okay so pretty much I have a band that is on the rise, we may have found our opening to small gigs at pubs and what not, I'm vocalist and main lyricist, i have a concept album I'm working on that only my guitarist knows about seeing as he's my closest friend.
the concept is about a relationship that then went bad and i broke it off only to regret it.. two years went by of constant cycles of going to friends to almost lovers again then back to enemies... then around christmas we saw each other at a party and her grand father had just died and i was comforting her... (I'm one of the few people that can) she rarely opens up to anyone. Then she ended up getting me drunk on tequila and we share cigarettes through the night, we end up hooking up. The twist was she was seeing another guy at the time and i was seeing another girl... my relationship between the girl fell apart and my ex who i hooked up with regretted what we did.... so i told her to go back to this guy as he is actually a really good man. I did this so things between us didn't go bad and she could be happy... so now she's dating him and I'm just messing around waiting for her and him to be over... kind of sad yeah i know... But in this process me and my ex have now become very good friends and so have her boyfriend and I... meanwhile me and my ex both still have feelings for each other... i have voiced it and she keeps confirming hers though her actions.
so now I'm in waiting so oi figured why not start something a little more productive.
facts that are essential.... I am smitten by her... and have been for over two years now. and I can only see a real future with her.
so far 3 songs in... they are not in chronological...
sorry for all the writing for those that took the time to read it... much appreciated.
1 - about a sunday we spent together just lying in bed for hours talking among other things (this was our first week dating) this was over two years ago.
I can’t think of any other ways on how I’d spend a day
But with you; cocooned and wrapped in our own heat
Nothing but natter and tongue tie
Exchanging smitten slur that only got us into trouble
That same slur was playing on my mind as lips brushed your neck
Going southbound
Socks intertwined
Enveloped within another gelling so intrinsically
And once you left, speculation and wonder to what was next.
2. when we dated we were both at school.. every day we would walk out together but e both went separate ways at a corner which was called Montrose hence the references to Montrose and we kissed on the corner before we parted ways each day... a little corny but its a very sentimental memory.
The trail that was left between us
Even gravity could not weigh down
After your lips left mine
The width would not drop
Sauntering past Montrose
Engulfed by the hierarchy
With just enough spread for the light to pierce
I would have never thought this moment would be branded
I could never expel this reminiscence
That dragged me through to the days end
Day with this end were never wasted
I would have never thought this moment would be branded
3 - this is how i have been currently feeling about the current situation and its a few memories and what is of current right now.
Synapses that connected are now soused
Sparks flickering to fade
The former idea of what was between us is drowning
Our fingers clasped so tight now drape on another’s
But the feeling remains
Misguided by the signs
The only sense I can make of this is when inebriated
Keeping busy is just wasting time
Waiting for you to refrain from another
The bottles that were strewn around us
I still recall
Miscellany of tequila and reds still reside
As does the smell of shampoo and Montrose
In hindsight events may be larger than they appear
The array of decisions was limitless
But it is you that has molded me to opt
To the same; time and time again
The bottles that were strewn around us
I still recall
Now the former idea is still in reach
The conscious choice is crystal clear
Patience is now both friend and foe.
To anyone who read through my rambling I sincerely thank you
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