Low on song ideas...
I'm trying to write one on cutting, possibly, but I'm having problems personifying it...
Help wanted. Send in stories, or ideas please
Thanks,
Shelby
Revelation
Finally a consultation
We've been waiting for you
THe darkness that once adjured your soul
Burns in the pupils,
lights up the room
We have finally caught you
You can pray
You can cry
Try to leave this life behind
But you can never, never
Really speak your mind
You can try to escape
You can cry
You can pray
We've been waiting
Always behind a veil of honesty
Though honestly
We've been wanting
As you're watching
The miracle of life
Taken far away
Invisible Openings
To solidified reckonings
What we're becoming
Is slowly tearing us apart
Faith or the rapture
Or something there after
We find ourselves losing the lost
Blessed we may be
But endowments we'll never see
The possessed reckon we'll see the end
Inevitable bearings
And illusive staring
Breaking us down to memories
Memories of Him
Finally wrote the music for my song "Morningstar". I'll be posting it next week, and I hope you guys will give me feedback. I really appreciate the comments on my lyrics, and could always use more, so PLEASE read and tell me what you think :)
Love you guys!
I need inspiration for a song I'm writing. I need ideas, please. I'm pretty desperate. I have the begin written for guitar, but I need an idea for what it is going to be about. Stories would be great. They get me inspired.
Thanks guys :)
Here's another song (I know, two in one day! You lucky ducks :)
"Delirium"
Welcome to the world where
Nothing makes sense
And you’re delirious
The visions in your head
Pastel and dripping red,
The scratches on your arms promote what they’ve been saying…
Locked away,
Inside you stay
The shreds of sanity in disarray
The building sway,
The given day
Coming closer, closer, closer
Away
Because you’re senseless
Reckless,
Anything but breathless
Tempted by the fruit of the sane
Senseless, Reckless,
Anything but breathless
Crouched inside,
Destroyed your mind
Anything to assure you’re mine
Confined, put away
Making sure you cannot stray
Swirling red in your head
The visions say instead
Turn away, thread is frayed
Connecting you to lucidity
Locked away,
Inside you stay
The shreds of sanity in disarray
The building sway,
The given day
Coming closer, closer, closer
Away
Behind a wall
You’re begging only fall
Needle-pointed dagger
A dizzy, broken stagger
Does not matter
You’re gone
Locked away,
Inside you stay
The shreds of sanity in disarray
The building sway,
The given day
Coming closer, closer,closer
Away
Because you’re senseless
Reckless,
Anything but breathless
Tempted by the fruit of the sane
Senseless, Reckless,
Anything but breathless.
Inside you will stay, my prey
This is a song I wrote one day. I'm fixated on angels, especially fallen ones, which is what this song is about. I wanted to thank those who have been giving me feedback. It means so much to me.
"Tainted"
Divinity
THe final war against reality
How do you know when honestly
Faith has no meaning
Allies depleating
A black heart is bleeding
A bloodthirsty meaning
Seemingly innocent
Kiss your wings goodbye
Expelled,never getting one more try
A soulless God that you cannot find
Anywhere
The chill in the air mortifies, petrifies
Ash and shadows your new domain
Shackled down
You look around
A land of perpetual screaming
Her eyes flashing
Equally matching the look of
Horror on your face
Merciless laughter
Filling you after your crime
Kiss your wings goodbye
He'll never give you another try
A soulless God that you cannot find
Anywhere
The chill in the air mortifies, petrifies
Ash and shadows your new domain
Denied the flesh
Granted the pain
The semi-razored tissue
That still remains
The scars that marr
Still painted in the star
Fall on your way down
Exile
Denied
From the Lord you have defied
Arise
Tainted one
Death personified
Kiss your wings goodbye
Expelled,never getting one more try
A soulless God that you cannot find
Anywhere
The chill in the air mortifies, petrifies
Ash and shadows your new domain
The debt's been repaid
Taken from your skin
Well played
This one is called "Never Again" Once again, feedback is appreciated :)
How long until I make the right decision?
Will I always be wrong,
Or can I change this vision
Realign
And finally make right
With what I’ve done
And who I’ve killed to get there
Shattered, like broken glass
I always knew that we’d never last
But I’d always hoped that I’d get past
These fears
Of losing all that I’ve held dear
I’m afraid you’ll disappear
And leave me all alone
In here
I’ve destroyed
All that’s ever meant to me
I’ve toyed
With shallow emotion and wicked notions
That never were enough
It never was enough
Every fiber of being,
I’m tired of believing
Because I’ll lie, and with every try
I’ll die
Shattered, like broken glass
I always knew that we’d never last
But I’d always hoped that I’d get past
These fears
Of losing all that I’ve held dear
I’m afraid you’ll disappear
And leave me all alone
In here
I’m so sorry
That I couldn’t put us back together again
I’m sorry
That at this point I’m not sure
That we’ll ever be even friends
The clock is ticking
And time is up
Shattered, like broken glass
I always knew that we’d never last
But I’d always hoped that I’d get past
These fears
Of losing all that I’ve held dear
I’m afraid you’ll disappear
And leave me all alone
In here
Leave me all alone in here,
But I know I’ve died