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  • "Losing "

    by shouse043 on October 31, 2011
    Invisible Openings To solidified reckonings What we're becoming Is slowly tearing us apart Faith or the rapture Or something there after We find ourselves losing the lost Blessed we may be But endowments we'll never see The possessed reckon we'll see the end Inevitable bearings And illusive staring Breaking us down to memories Memories of Him
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  • NEW SONG SOON

    by shouse043 on October 27, 2011
    Finally wrote the music for my song "Morningstar". I'll be posting it next week, and I hope you guys will give me feedback. I really appreciate the comments on my lyrics, and could always use more, so PLEASE read and tell me what you think :) Love you guys!
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  • Inspiration needed

    by shouse043 on October 26, 2011
    I need inspiration for a song I'm writing. I need ideas, please. I'm pretty desperate. I have the begin written for guitar, but I need an idea for what it is going to be about. Stories would be great. They get me inspired. Thanks guys :)
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  • October 25, 2011

    by shouse043 on October 25, 2011
    Here's another song (I know, two in one day! You lucky ducks :) "Delirium" Welcome to the world where Nothing makes sense And you’re delirious The visions in your head Pastel and dripping red, The scratches on your arms promote what they’ve been saying… Locked away, Inside you stay The shreds of sanity in disarray The building sway, The given day Coming closer, closer, closer Away Because you’re senseless Reckless, Anything but breathless Tempted by the fruit of the sane Senseless, Reckless, Anything but breathless Crouched inside, Destroyed your mind Anything to assure you’re mine Confined, put away Making sure you cannot stray Swirling red in your head The visions say instead Turn away, thread is frayed Connecting you to lucidity Locked away, Inside you stay The shreds of sanity in disarray The building sway, The given day Coming closer, closer, closer Away Behind a wall You’re begging only fall Needle-pointed dagger A dizzy, broken stagger Does not matter You’re gone Locked away, Inside you stay The shreds of sanity in disarray The building sway, The given day Coming closer, closer,closer Away Because you’re senseless Reckless, Anything but breathless Tempted by the fruit of the sane Senseless, Reckless, Anything but breathless. Inside you will stay, my prey
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  • Tainted

    by shouse043 on October 25, 2011
    This is a song I wrote one day. I'm fixated on angels, especially fallen ones, which is what this song is about. I wanted to thank those who have been giving me feedback. It means so much to me. "Tainted" Divinity THe final war against reality How do you know when honestly Faith has no meaning Allies depleating A black heart is bleeding A bloodthirsty meaning Seemingly innocent Kiss your wings goodbye Expelled,never getting one more try A soulless God that you cannot find Anywhere The chill in the air mortifies, petrifies Ash and shadows your new domain Shackled down You look around A land of perpetual screaming Her eyes flashing Equally matching the look of Horror on your face Merciless laughter Filling you after your crime Kiss your wings goodbye He'll never give you another try A soulless God that you cannot find Anywhere The chill in the air mortifies, petrifies Ash and shadows your new domain Denied the flesh Granted the pain The semi-razored tissue That still remains The scars that marr Still painted in the star Fall on your way down Exile Denied From the Lord you have defied Arise Tainted one Death personified Kiss your wings goodbye Expelled,never getting one more try A soulless God that you cannot find Anywhere The chill in the air mortifies, petrifies Ash and shadows your new domain The debt's been repaid Taken from your skin Well played
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  • Another song

    by shouse043 on October 21, 2011
    This one is called "Never Again" Once again, feedback is appreciated :) How long until I make the right decision? Will I always be wrong, Or can I change this vision Realign And finally make right With what I’ve done And who I’ve killed to get there Shattered, like broken glass I always knew that we’d never last But I’d always hoped that I’d get past These fears Of losing all that I’ve held dear I’m afraid you’ll disappear And leave me all alone In here I’ve destroyed All that’s ever meant to me I’ve toyed With shallow emotion and wicked notions That never were enough It never was enough Every fiber of being, I’m tired of believing Because I’ll lie, and with every try I’ll die Shattered, like broken glass I always knew that we’d never last But I’d always hoped that I’d get past These fears Of losing all that I’ve held dear I’m afraid you’ll disappear And leave me all alone In here I’m so sorry That I couldn’t put us back together again I’m sorry That at this point I’m not sure That we’ll ever be even friends The clock is ticking And time is up Shattered, like broken glass I always knew that we’d never last But I’d always hoped that I’d get past These fears Of losing all that I’ve held dear I’m afraid you’ll disappear And leave me all alone In here Leave me all alone in here, But I know I’ve died
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  • Burn

    by shouse043 on October 17, 2011
    Song I wrote. Feedback please. "Burn" To burn in pleasure is better than never So peacefully I'll go Must be excited, The body ignited in such resiliant glow So peacefully I'll go Never once thought that I'd be here with you Don't take my hand or we'll stumble through Falling through heaven And losing my breath and finally I'll assume that I have become you I can't fight this The feeling, digress The lioness she waits I pray for no escape To burn in pleasure is better than never so peacefully I'll go Must be excited, the body ignited With such resiliant glow So peacefully I'll go
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