Someone did
by bronte0112 on May 06, 2010This is a song i wrote. Feedback would be great, on anything i could change or make better :D and be honest! i just do this for fun so i won't be offended if you think it sucks :)
Someone Did.
She locks herself in her room
and lets it all crash down
the wave of emotions
that would make her drown
She puts on a brave face
and says its all ok
when that pain that she’s feeling
just won’t go away
And what do you do
when you can’t let it out
when its tucked up inside
and you have no where to hide
She thought she couldn’t when she could
She thought she wasn’t when she was
she thought that no one loved her
when someone did
She’s always lived the good life
with so many blessings
but it was herself
that was blocking the light
She missed out on everything
because she shied away
all she wanted was more confidence
so all the feelings could go away
She thought she couldn’t when she could
she thought she wasn’t when she was
she thought that no on loved her
when some one did
He thought she was amazing
loved her with his everything
but she couldn’t see what a blessing
it was to be in his heart.
She thought she couldn’t when she could
she thought she wasn’t when she was
she thought that no one loved her
when someone did.
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